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The waiting of an angel

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发表于 2010-5-5 11:41:52 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
The waiting of an angel


By tokgo ice dragon

  

Year after year,

You wait for me around here.

I know how much you’ve missed me,

‘Cause there is a river before you

that is full of your tears.

   

I’m so happy to know

That the God also cares for you.

He should have been touched.

So he makes you become an angel.

   

Are you still crying.

What are you telling.

Do the pieces of flowers know

What  the meaning

of your persistent waiting is.

     

Hey my baby,

Don’t be afraid.

I am almost here.

You won’t feel alone

on the way to the heaven.

and I’ ll be with you always.



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发表于 2010-5-7 14:51:08 | 显示全部楼层
先说 wait是个动词, the wait of 可以说吗,是不可以改为 waiting 或用wait for 呢?

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发表于 2010-5-7 15:17:28 | 显示全部楼层
god also cares for you.
God不用the,也不用单数吧
Does the pieces of flowers know
What is the meaning
该是 what the meaning is 吧
and I’ ll be with you always
i am be there wit h you  forever 怎么样呢,个人建议,相互探讨!happy meeting u

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