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发表于 2010-3-21 09:54:20 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
《Angel》
By Qin'er
She always likes to dream,
When she opens a pair of wings,
She'll travel into the sky to seek,
Her love will become a best song on the moon
She always likes to dream,
She'll fly to a place where it is full of peace
To escape from this world she can't breathe
To began to live a kind of life which belongs to her.
If you like her, love her
Please don't become an ordinary person
Because she ever told others
That an angel don't fall in love with an ordinary person
For you are able to be with her
you should overcome all the dangers
Even if you only have a short happy-term  
Let the wings of an angel to guard your love garden

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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-21 09:55:46 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2010-3-21 23:14:12 | 显示全部楼层
where it fulls of peace ----  where it's full of peace
Whatever you should overcome all the dangers ----  whatever you should overcome
Whatever 和 all the dangers 在這句裡是相同的語法成份﹐所以在此重複了。
you should overcome whatever = you should overcome all the dangers

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发表于 2010-3-21 23:14:22 | 显示全部楼层
 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-21 23:21:20 | 显示全部楼层
[quote]where it fulls of peace ----  where it's full of peace
Whatever you should overcome all the dange ...
感谢你的细心批改!再继续

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发表于 2010-3-23 10:04:53 | 显示全部楼层
 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-24 19:51:53 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2010-3-31 18:14:09 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2010-3-31 21:17:21 | 显示全部楼层
To began to live a kind of life to belong her................To begin to live a kind of life to belong her
Maybe this line is better:  To begin to live a kind of life (which) belongs to her.
A beaubiful love poem!:handshake

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发表于 2010-4-8 15:14:27 | 显示全部楼层
to Qin'er
The one
   By Tokgo ice dragon

I am just an ordinary,
But I’m not anybody.
Once I fell in love,
It will be a moving story.
  
You can take my heart.
You can have my soul.
You can be near and far
But please don’t let it go.

My elf or my angel,
I am the moth,
And you’ll be the candle.
Maybe I am just an ordinary,
Besides,I am the one to you.
If you’re the one
My angel
I
Will love you.

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发表于 2010-4-19 10:39:57 | 显示全部楼层
That an angel don't fall in love with ordinary person
这里 应该在 with后加an 或 persons
问好琴棋书画斑斑!

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发表于 2010-4-20 15:07:47 | 显示全部楼层
天使
晴儿
她经常喜欢梦想
当她张开她的一双翅膀
她将前往天国寻求
她的爱将变成月亮上最好的一首歌

她经常喜欢梦想
她将飞到一个地方,那里存满了和平
以逃出这个让她难以呼吸的地方
去开始一种只属于自己的一种生活

如果你喜欢她,爱她
请别成为一个平庸的人
因为她曾经告诉他人
一个天使不会爱上一个平庸的人

为了能够和她在一起
克服所有的为难吧
即使你只是拥有一段短暂的快乐
让天使的翅膀来守护你爱的花园

翻译是这样子吧,如果再加修改是不会更好点呢1
问好晴儿,明净的诗句,也翻译你一个,互相学习哦,
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