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发表于 2011-1-31 13:23:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
The one I love has a stone heart
Although the heart is sweet and kind
And now she determines to depart
Haply nothing can change her mind
We ever tightly hugged each other
With meek love but hot enough to burn
We have been tired but happy together
But now we get the point of no return
You quote away let past times flow
You quote not bother,your life is nice
Tho Heartbroken, but also I know
Annoying flame should harden the ice
But the thought you'll serve as other's wife
Brings me anguish for each day of my life


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发表于 2011-2-2 09:06:38 | 显示全部楼层
 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-2 13:03:27 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2011-2-5 21:24:13 | 显示全部楼层
你很热情,也富于辩论,去申请这个版块的斑竹吧。新年快乐

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 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-6 11:00:37 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2011-2-8 22:53:48 | 显示全部楼层
 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-9 18:27:26 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2011-2-10 22:03:39 | 显示全部楼层
the general way is to add one or two words to make the line five feet:
The one I long love has a stony heart
Although the heart is really sweet and kind
And now she has determined to depart
And so, perhaps nothing can change her mind

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 楼主| 发表于 2011-2-10 23:21:21 | 显示全部楼层
发表于 2011-2-12 01:06:17 | 显示全部楼层
it's iambus, because every line has 5 feet and in all feet here it's "unstressed--stressed" combination.

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