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silence & distance

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发表于 2010-12-6 22:16:38 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
all alone
you stood on a worn stone
by the running river
who is always on travel
you didn't say a word
and so did the flying wind
your face was  so frezen  
and your heart has been broken
the sun dropped to the west hill
and the strangers on the road have all disapeared
as the tired night was falling down
onto this accient town
how i wish you could turn around
but i knew that you'd never found
the shining warm lights
come from my watching eyes
which was hiden not far
away behind your heart
so close
it seemd to be
you and me
that i could feel your silence   spreading over the universe
while whatever i tried
still i could not reach your sight

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